Wednesday, November 28, 2012
Paraphrase
There are many dangers that face the astronauts,such the high speed on everything and the too
long journey to arrive to the planet of Mars.Yet,the major issue is that the astronauts can be face a
lot of radiation exposure in deep space.And the lack of gravity can leaves them in dangerous comic
energy more than being in orbit or the moons way (Kluger,2004,P,48)
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Great job, Hamzah! Be sure not to change the meaning of the original. Speed is important on the journey to Mars, not a danger. Also be careful with modal verbs like "can". They are always followed by the base form of the verb: "can face," "can leave".
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